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Book Review - The Book of Answers

6/12/2020

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The Book of Answers by A.L. Tait (Hachette Australia) PB RRP $14.99     
ISBN: 9780734417695

Reviewed by Jeffery E Doherty

The Book of Answers is the second book in the gripping Ateban Cipher by A.L. Tait. It follows on from the first book in the series, The Book of Secrets.

Gabe and his companions must journey across the country to a remote mountain citadel to learn the secrets of the mysterious book he has been tasked to protect. They also need to find a way to rescue Merry and Gwyn's father from the executioner and to help their new friend, Eddie - Crown Prince Edward - to help prove he is the true prince. However, the king is gravely ill and the traitors who have put a look-a-like in Eddie’s place are hot on their heels and hunting them every step of the way.  

The remote fortress of Hayden's Mont does bring answers to Gabe and his companions, but not to the questions they were seeking. The stakes for the main characters have risen dramatically from the events in the first book and the group must re-evaluate their priorities in their life or death race to foil the traitors.

The Book of Answers is an excellent second addition to the Ateban Cipher series and is sure to be a hit with both girls and boys who love a great adventure story. The mix of female and male lead characters makes the story more interesting. Gwyn's stubborn confidence and young Midge's mysterious connection with animals, compliment Gabe and Eddie's determination. The companions will all have to build their trust and work together if they are to succeed in their quest.  This book is full of adventure and intrigue and would ideally suit readers 8-12 years old.  

​Original review on Buzz Words Magazine
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Book Review - The Royal Ranger - The Red Fox Clan

6/12/2020

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The Royal Ranger - The Red Fox Clan by John Flanagan (Random House Australia) PB
RRP $18.99 
​ISBN: 9780143785903

Reviewed by Jeffery E Doherty

Maddie is a secret Ranger's Apprentice under the guidance of the legendary Will Treaty. However, for one month each year she must return home and resume her identity as Princess Madelyn. At the best of times Maddie finds castle life dull but to make matters worse, she will be stuck there while her father, Horace, and Gilan, the Commandant of the Ranger Corps, are taking half the garrison of Castle Araluen to put a stop to a group called the Red Fox Clan, which wants to restore the old law of male rulers for the kingdom.

This year's visit to the castle is anything but dull. Maddie uncovers long-kept secrets and a devastating plot against the crown. She must discover the identity of the man in the red fox mask or the peace her family have worked for could be in terrible danger.

Having read John Flanagan's original Ranger's Apprentice books some years ago, I found returning to the world of Araluen comfortable and familiar. It is good to see a new generation of Rangers’ books appearing to entertain a new generation of readers.

Maddie is confident, yet still has moments of vulnerability and self-doubt that make her character more likable. The book is full of adventure, treachery and action. It has a wonderful cast of interesting characters and the pace of the action and easy flow of the writing keep the reader turning the pages. I did find some parts of the book a little predictable. It may have been a lucky guess, but I picked the leader of the Red Fox Clan as soon as he was introduced into the story. The book was a thoroughly enjoyably read with a satisfying ending and leaves the way open for book three in the series which is coming later in 2018.

The Royal Ranger - The Red Fox Clan is the second book in the Royal Ranger series of middle grade fiction. It would suit readers 8-12 years old or readers who enjoy stories of fantasy and adventure with a confident young female hero. If you haven't already, readers are encouraged to read The Royal Ranger (Book 1) although this book can be read as a stand-alone story.

Original Review posted on Buzz Words Magazine 
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James Patterson Writing Masterclass - Week Three

1/29/2017

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In week three of my Writing Masterclass journey I worked through the second part of the Outlining session, Writers Block and Creating Characters. All were interesting and generated lots of notes. Thank goodness this is a video course where I get to pause and rewind what James is saying.


Outlines (Part 2) - The main points covered in this Outlining session were;
  • How to troubleshoot your outline. Things like finding low points in the drama and becoming repetitive.  
  • The outline needs to be organic and change as you write the book
  • Once you have the outline, step back and start writing.
 
Writers Block - The blank page is the enemy but with an outline this becomes less of a problem. A big cause of writers block is when a scene or a chapter isn't working. Writers start to stress and question themselves. The best way to fix this is to;
  • Freight Train through the first draft. Basically, if you are having problems with a scene, write TBD and move on. It doesn't matter if that scene isn't working on the second or third drafts either. Don't let it bog you down. This is a bit like the NaNoWriMo philosophy.
  • Stay Focused. Learn how to tune the world out when you write. Listening to quiet instrumental music may help. You need to focus to get in tune with your story.
  • Take a break if you are becoming overloaded.
  • Take it seriously. Even if you aren't writing 'War and peace' or 'Ulysses', give it everything that you've got and do the best you can possibly do.
  • Practice, practice, practice. That speaks for itself.
 
Creating Characters - One of the things that rise a book above the pack is introducing fresh, involving characters that bring a unique way of looking at the world.
  • You want the reader to have strong feelings about the character, love them or hate them.
  • Create a character that makes an impression on the reader.
  • Know your character, know what makes them tick. You need to get the motivation and emotion right.
  • You need to be able to get inside the head of your character.
  • Make your hero complex.
  • Make your villain complex too, make them worthy of your hero.
  • Make important secondary characters, make them vital to the story.
  • Create reader intimacy through your characters. Readers find out more about characters in a book than they know about real people in their life.
  • You have to make a character they are not going to be able to forget.

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James Patterson Writing Masterclass - Week 2

1/19/2017

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I have now finished the first week of the James Patterson Writing Masterclass, following the suggested timetable in the course notes. I have completed the first six video lessons and I'm working on the associated assignments. I am finding the course quite enjoyable and even inspiring. Though the information passed on by Mr. Patterson in the video tutorials is nothing new, he delivers it in a relaxed, conversational way that makes the lessons seem intimate.
 
The topics covered so far are;
  1. Introduction to the class
  2. Passion - Habit
  3. Raw Ideas
  4. Plot
  5. Research
  6. Outline
 
Passion - Habit dealt with the notion that you really need to be passionate about writing in general and in your current project in particular. If you are not passionate about your story, how do you expect readers to be. So, keep the passion alive, love what you do, believe in yourself and learn to endure rejection. Makes sense to me. The habit part dealt with stressing the need to write every day, to make writing a habit, a part of your daily schedule. How can you call yourself a writer, if you don't write?
 
Raw Ideas. This one was interesting. Mr. Patterson says that it is really rare to find a new and fresh idea, but finding ways to put several ideas together in a new and fresh way can create a unique story. He writes his ideas down and keeps them in an ideas folder. There is nothing new in this information but it is still good solid advice. The other thing he stressed in this lesson was to "read widely and learn about lots of things." You can't come up with ideas about things you don't know and you never know what piece of obscure knowledge might spark that brilliant idea for a book.
 
Plot. This lesson wasn't so much about how to plot a novel in a nuts-and-bolts way. It was more about the necessity of raising the stakes in your story and about creating a worthy villain for your hero to face. The challenges to your hero both internally and externally need to be challenging and interesting. One thing he said resonated with me. "Condense your plot, concentrate on causality. The king dies - then the queen dies is a story. The king dies and the queen dies of grief, is a plot." I thought that was an interesting way to put it.
 
Research. This lesson stress the need to git it right. Know the details, know the locations, know your vocations because if you get it wrong, there are readers out there who do know and you will lose them forever. If you are conducting interviews as part of your research, make sure the interviewee is verbal. Finding a talker who is passionate about their field is like striking gold. Another point was not to be a know-it-all. Some writers decide that if they have done all this research, by god the reader is going to know about. They drop huge - pointless to the story - info dumps so the reader can see how clever they are. Mr. Patterson also stressed that there are no excuses. With the internet, there has never been an easier time to do your research.
 
Outlines. This lesson has been split into two parts. It is the lesson I have been the most excited to get to because outlining is one of my weakest skills as a writer. I took pages of notes on this session. It was set out in a practical way, working through the process he uses to outline his books. Starting with jotting down everything he can think of that happens in the story, just one or two lines for each thing. Sorting through, discarding some ideas and adding more, then ordering them. He then takes the time to expand on each idea with just enough detail to know what happens in that scene. Mr. Patterson says that sometimes he might spend up to three months getting the outline right. He believes this is one of the most important aspects of writing a novel and can save so much time and heartache in the long term. The best part of this lesson is the fact that he has included, in the workbook, the complete outline for one of his favourite books, Honeymoon. Reading through this outline has given me some invaluable insight into the process.
 
Stay tuned for week three.

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Writing Masterclass

1/13/2017

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Week One
 
Some time ago I saw a Youtube advert for a writing masterclass with James Patterson. I didn't skip the ad, in fact I clicked on the link and read up on the on-line video course. It actually looked pretty cool and dealt with several elements of writing I struggle with. Even though I thought hard about it, I didn't sign up.
  • I had too much other stuff on.
  • I wasn't in the right head-space to complete a course.
  • Although not overly expensive, there was still a not insubstantial cost.
  • There were a lot of negative people saying James hasn't actually written a book in over a decade, that he just puts his name on other writers works, taking the credit and most of the royalties.
  • James is not one of my favourite authors.
 
Lately, I had been thinking about the masterclass again and looking at my reasons for not signing up. True, I still have a lot of stuff on. I'm working full time, I'm trying to finish the second book in my middle grade series, I have a number of artistic projects in the pipe-line, including producing a dozen illustrations for an upcoming biography. I have a family and a new grandchild on the way. Yes, work and some family matters have been quite stressful over the last two years and I don't foresee much of an improvement in the coming year on those fronts. The cost and the negativity toward Mr Patterson, these were all just excuses and if I want to treat my writing professionally, I need to be professional. I need to prioritise my writing career and stop treating it like a hobby.
 
Although not my favourite author, James Patterson is a major success. I have enjoyed reading his titles that I have read and he must be doing something right because his books usually make the New York Times Best Seller list.
 
Then last night I was on Youtube and the advert for the course appeared again. Omen? Coincidence? Simple good marketing? Who cares. I signed up and started the course today.
 
I am going to post weekly as I work through the class and share my experiences. So far, I have watched the introduction, the second video lesson on Passion and Habbit, and I have started the third video on Raw Ideas. Now, I am working on the assignments; writing for at least one hour every day and coming up with three raw book ideas.
 
Okay, back to work now, time to put those raw book ideas down on paper...
 
See you next week with a progress update.

    

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Creative Kids Tales - Featured Emerging Illustrator and Interview

2/1/2016

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​I am very proud to be the featured Emerging Illustrator on the Creative Kids Tales site for the month of February. Creative Kids Tales is a wonderful site that helps illustrators and authors, especially emerging ones to increase their exposure. It is also a great resource for readers, writers and illustrators with competitions and a huge collection of children's book reviews.

If you would like to visit their site just follow this link.

Creative Kids Tales
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Here is the interview I had with site's coordinator, Georgie Donaghey.

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Why do you want to be a published author/illustrator?

I have always been a bit of a nerd. I built a bookcase that looks like the TARDIS from Doctor Who. All of my favourite books live in there. The real TARDIS is bigger on the inside and can take you to meet weird and wonderful characters in new worlds full of adventure. To me books are the same. They are bigger on the inside too, portals to strange and wondrous places. Who wouldn't want to create something that amazing. But I suppose the real answer is, being published is like being accepted. It is graduating from being a writer/artist to a author/illustrator.

How long have you been writing/drawing?

I have been writing stories and really bad poetry since high school, but mainly as a hobby. I started going along to the Kids and Young Adult Literature Festivals about ten years ago and decided then that if I was going to call myself a writer, then I was going to have to start taking it seriously. Since then I have been trying to learn as much as I can about making my writing better.
I have been drawing for as long as I can remember, probably since I could hold a pencil.

How did you celebrate your first publication?


My first children's book, "Paper Magic" came out in late 2013. I was lucky enough to be able to write and illustrate the book. When I received the acceptance email from the publisher, I did an extended Happy Dance in front of the computer, then did another one when I printed the email and showed my wife. We celebrated again during the book launch at the school where I work - with non-alcoholic sparkly wine - it was a children's book and we were at a school so it only seemed right to do it that way. A number of the kids from the school were models for the illustrations and they were there to help us celebrate.


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Book Review - The Rooftop by Toby Hammerschlag

9/5/2015

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The Rooftop by Toby Hammerschleg


Published by Jo Jo Publishing


‘The Rooftop’ is a surprising story. The novel is set at an inner city school in Sydney where four children from diverse backgrounds learn about themselves and each other through the unusual combination of Scripture and netball.

I really liked the simple appealing design of the book's cover. It highlighted the setting and introduced the readers to the main characters.  Upon reading the back cover blurb - which did the book little justice - I thought this story would hold very little interest for me. However, the author delves into issues of divorce, learning difficulties, and the topical subject of refugees facing the threat of deportation. This is done sensitively through the eyes of the four children. The character of Emma, the only one of the children not facing a personal dilemma, is used as an emotional foil to highlight the other children's problems.

Author Toby Hammerschlag has created a thoughtful book with a message for readers. The themes of friendship and freedom feature strongly throughout the story. The ending is quite unexpected and thought provoking but perhaps a little abrupt.

This is definitely an interesting and worthwhile book to read.

 

Reviewed by Jeffery E Doherty
CKT Book Reviewer

Author/ Illustrator: Toby Hammerschlag
Title: The Rooftop
Publisher: Jo Jo Publishing
ISBN: 9780994183873
Published: 2015
Age: 8-12



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Book Review - Messy Jellyfish by Ruth Galloway

7/11/2015

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Messy Jellyfish by Ruth Galloway

Published by Koala Books

 

‘Messy Jellyfish’ is an odd couple tale. Best friends Jellyfish and Seahorse live in a rockpool. Jellyfish loves to sing and dance and make a mess! Seahorse wants things to be quiet and tidy. How can they get along?

When the cosiest corner of the rockpool becomes an unexpected party venue, the friendship between Seahorse and Jellyfish is tested. In this fishy story, these two friends learn how important it is to be kind and consider the feelings of others.

This book hosts a delightful collection of supporting characters. I particularly liked the Singing Shrimps and Silly Starfish. The illustrations are simple and bright, complimenting the text.

Author and illustrator Ruth Galloway has created a lovely picture book with a message for readers.

This is definitely a book I will read to my class at school.

 

Reviewed by Jeffery E Doherty
CKT Book Reviewer

Author/ Illustrator: Ruth Galloway
Title: Messy Jellyfish
Publisher: Koala Books
ISBN: 9781742761091
Published: 2015
Age: 3+





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Brilliant Writing Resource 

4/24/2014

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Nathan Bransford's Writing Advice Database

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Nathan Bransford is the author ofHow to Write a Novel (October 2013), Jacob Wonderbar and the Cosmic Space Kapow (Dial, May 2011), Jacob Wonderbar for President of the Universe (Dial, April 2012) and Jacob Wonderbar and the Interstellar Time Warp(Dial, February 2013). He was formerly a literary agent with Curtis Brown Ltd. and the social media manager at CNET and is now the Director of Community and Social Media at Freelancers Union. He lives in Brooklyn.

Nathan has been sharing his wisdom and experience with writers through his blog since 2006. He has put together an index linking to some of his most useful posts for writers.

This is one excellent resource for anyone who is serious about writing.

Nathan's Writing Advice Database
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How To Write A Powerful Ending

3/1/2014

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This is an interesting article from Write For Kids Org. Thought I would share.
How to Write a Powerful Ending (via http://writeforkids.org)

  The first few lines of any story are the most important — and often most difficult — words you'll write. The next most challenging piece of writing is the ending. Once you draw your readers in and take them through your story, you need to leave…



 
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